Celeste is sheltering from the rain in the doorway of a coffee shop. Marc barges into the same doorway hiding from the rain and nudges Celeste in his hurry. He apologises and invities her to share a coffee with him. They hit it off and Marc takes Celeste home with consensual sex on both their minds.
Rain is a short 168 KB adult erotic story available on the Amazon Kindle. It was written in 2013 and like the scenario can be described as a coffee break read. But like coffee, you get some good blends and some poor ones.
Rain is a very regular and tame erotic adult tale. For a sexy story it is very dull. There is nothing special about Rain. The dialogue is very unimaginative and the setting unrealistic. The sex is rather boring and conventional. The sex does not turn the reader on, as it is about as erotic as watching two dogs in the park. There is nothing unusual as Marc and Celeste roll around on the bed.
Rain is a bad read and I vote it the minimum of 1 star. This adult short story is one to AVOID.
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