This short horror story was written in 2010 and is available as a 64KB Amazon Kindle eBook. Darrin moves into a new room in a shared house rental. He gets to know his new housemates but there is a little problem. Things are not quite right and Darrin is concerned about bugs. Nobody likes talking about bugs but quickly things get under Darrin's skin.
This is a quirky little tale that is very well told. You quickly get to know just how Darrin feels. The tension is there as Darrin deals with the problems of his new home. This short story is an okay read. Paul has used it to showcase his storytelling skills and it succeeds as a coffee break read. This is a creepy tale that gives you a shiver. It is not a challenge to read and I found it a bright, refreshing read that I will vote 3 stars. Paul shows promise and could move on to writing full length novels if he comes up with a big story idea. I wish him well and hope his publishing dreams one day become true.
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