Beth and Jack have been dating for a couple of months. Jack wants Beth to shave her pubic hair but she does not want to until one day when she wants to give him a surprise.
What follows is a poorly written short story of vanilla sex. I got the impression it was written by a teenager who wrongly thought she was ticking all the boxes. There is no characterization and her short story reads like a report of a football match. Touch, touch, stroke, stroke, push, push and Goal! Don't be mislead by the title, it is not about the joys of shaved pubic hair and how it brings a brightness and freshness to your daily life. Nor does it describe the sensation of shaving, the razor cuts and the tautness of your skin.
Bare Down There is very poor soft porn. It is not an erotic tale and you will have more fun watching dogs in the park. This is not a unique tale, it is so ordinary and boring. Nothing is unusual and her writing syle is cheap. As a coffee time read you should concentrate on your coffee as this short story will leave you cold. This is one to AVOID so I will only vote it 1 tiny star.
Bare Down There is available as an Amazon Kindle eBook and was written in 2014.
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