Beth wants to spice up her sex life with Jack but he is put off by her forest of pubic hair. She decides to take a gamble and shave her pubic hair, this is her tale in this erotic short story.
This erotic short story is very disappointing indeed. Allison is unable to describe the feelings and joy obtained from shaving away pubic hair. The shaving is almost mentioned in passing as this story moves onto regular oral and penetrative sex. There is nothing erotic about this story and it is rather tame. It is poor in it's choice of vocabulary and the dialogue between them both made me cringe! For example...
"Oh yes baby. Bounce on my rod. Bounce on my cock baby. I love being inside you baby. I love it when you are on top of me baby. Keep bouncing on my cock."
or just as bad from Beth...
"Oh yeah honey. I love it when you fuck me hard like that. Fuck me hard and deep. You know I love it when you fuck me hard and deep."
Bare Down There did not excite me and I found this erotic short story a bore. Allison brings nothing to the table and I feel her book is a waste of time. This is not a thrilling or entertaining read and is rather puerile. Writing erotic stories is a hard task and maybe when Allison has some more sexual experience in her private life, she may be able to tease the reader. At the moment her writing is not erotic and her short story is such a sorry tale that I can only vote it the minimum score of 1 star. This is one to MISS even as a free download.
Bare Down There was written in 2014 and is available as an Amazon Kindle eBook.
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