Kim goes to a party in this short adult erotic story. Kim loses her shoes and is turned on by the feelings aroused walking around barefoot. There is a long build up to the point when Kim is barefoot and the sexy action begins.
As adult erotic tales go, Fetid Feet is not the best. Adria sets the party preparation and scene very well but it is not a thrilling read. The feelings brought on about being barefoot are well described but the sex with both men is vanilla.
There are far better short stories around and Fetid Feet is a disappointment. It brings nothing to the fetish scene, so I will only vote it 2 stars. There is a skill to writing a good short story, adult erotic or otherwise but Fetid Feet is a poor read. Fetid Feet is available as an Amazon Kindle eBook and was written in 2014.
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